What is an Argument?
The term argument has two meanings in academic writing.
First, it means an essay that takes a position on one side of a controversial
issue. You might write an argument against the death penalty, or for or
against censorship of pornography. But argument has another meaning, too.
It means an essay that, simply, argues a point. You might construct an
argument about the meaning of ancestor myths in a certain aborigine culture,
or you might write an argument defending your interpretation of "Tintern
Abbey." You are not necessarily taking one side of a controversial issue,
but you are required to defend your points with persuasive evidence. You
are taking a position.
In a sense, then, an argument is another word for a thesis.
An argument needs to be narrow enough for you to defend in the length of
essay assigned. You need to be able to find enough evidence to support
your assertions. You need to make a point worth arguing: a point that elicits
a "so what?" from your reader will not generate a strong essay.
The "so what" question is a good test for your argument.
If you pursue your argument, why is it important? What will readers learn
from it? How will it illuminate a text or help us to answer a problem?
The "so what" question can help you to distinguish a summary of observations
from a real argument. For example, you may notice that in a certain short
story there are recurring images of light and dark. This observation strikes
you as interesting: why? What question do you want to ask about this imagery?
What inferences can you draw from this imagery? When you notice something
interesting in a text, you are on your way to asking a question, and that
question puts you on your way to formulating an argument.
Argument essays begin with good questions. Often, those
questions are generated by primary texts. You notice something surprising,
disturbing, or interesting in the text, and you formulate a question to
help you understand why. Sometimes your questions come from your dissatisfaction
with the interpretations offered in secondary sources. You think: although
expert A offers one interpretation, I would like to offer another. Your
interpretation, supported by the evidence that you think is relevant, becomes
your argument.
Sometimes your questions come from problems that emerge
from class discussions, but are not fully resolved. You think: we have
gone so far in discussing a poem, but I think additional interpretations
can be made. Those interpretations become your argument.
No matter what position you may take to answer your question,
your argument essay will contain four basic elements:
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A claim, or the position that you put forth.
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Evidence, or the details that support your claim.
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Definition of terms, so that you are your reader share an
understanding of the terms that you use in present your claim and your
evidence.
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Consideration of counter-arguments, or opposing claims, to
show your reader why these are weak and your claim is strong.
Sometimes, the existence of counter-arguments makes students
feel uncomfortable: how, they ask, can they put forth an argument that
anyone else has opposed? Here is some advice to consider when dealing with
opposing arguments:
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What are the most important opposing arguments? What concessions
can I make and still support my own argument?
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What evidence do I have to support my own argument? How does
that evidence compare with that used by my opposition?
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What are possible misunderstandings of my own argument?
Testing the strength of your argument:
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Make sure your presentation is logical. Outlining an essay
after you write a first draft often can help you to test its logic. Write
a one sentence summary of the main point of each paragraph. Do the points
follow logically? Would additional discussion of one or two points strengthen
your argument? Do you digress? Should your paragraphs be re-ordered?
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Look at your use of evidence. Make sure that when you quote
a passage, that quotation is integrated into the context of your own essay.
Do you give the reader enough information about the quote in the text of
your essay so that the quotation is intelligible? Remember, documenting
a quotation in a note is not the same thing as setting the quotation up
correctly in your essay.
Do you interpret the quotation? Do not assume that
your reader will draw the same conclusions from the quotation that you
have drawn. Quotations should not substitute for your own explanations.
Quotations are evidence for your own assertions.
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Does your introduction and conclusion help the reader to
understand the significance of your argument? Do you answer the "so what"
question?
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